Evaluate your final draft. What are the strengths and weaknesses of it? What was difficult? What will you do differently next time?
My final draft was okay. I was pleased with the information given, but I felt the hook was still weak. It didn't really have an angle that was appropriate for Capital Gains; it was more of just a piece about Lansing City Market (LCM). I also had problems organizing the piece. I didn't know how to structure the paragraphs in a logical order, and I couldn't decide which order was most logical or progressive. I should have decided on a more specific angle before going to interview people at LCM, instead of developing a hook based on the information I discovered.
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